I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Tomai - I enjoyed reading your slides! It's great to hear your enjoy learning at Ōtaki School. Working hard at school will mean you can travel around the world one day. What a great goal! - Whāea Nicky
Hello Tomai. I like your blog profile.fun fact I also made a blog! You should check it out and For some reason you only have one picture. If you really only have one you should add more!.
Hi Tomai, Hi yoyoyo what up?I am Corina from NBC! I really liked your slide you done! Have you thought about putting more posts on your blog because I would like to see them. To improve you could try changing your face because it was all the same. Did you like doing this?
Hi my name is Ana and I go Owairaka School and I'm in room 23. I really like your blog post about your blog because I like the way you described you.You should check out my blog at (https://odsana.blogspot.com)
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Kia ora Tomai - I enjoyed reading your slides! It's great to hear your enjoy learning at Ōtaki School. Working hard at school will mean you can travel around the world one day. What a great goal! - Whāea Nicky
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my slides Whaea Nicky. I will try to work hard on my work and slides
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I like your background.
I like playing soccer too.
I enjoyed reading your blog.
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ReplyDeleteI like your blog profile.fun fact
I also made a blog! You should check it out and
For some reason you only have one picture. If you really only have one you should add more!.
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Thank you for saying that.I like your comment and I like your blog too.I like the minecraft person on your blog.
DeleteHi Tomai, Hi yoyoyo what up?I am Corina from NBC! I really liked your slide you done! Have you thought about putting more posts on your blog because I would like to see them. To improve you could try changing your face because it was all the same. Did you like doing this?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ana and I go Owairaka School and I'm in room 23. I really like your blog post about your blog because I like the way you described you.You should check out my blog at (https://odsana.blogspot.com)
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